Red rose

by Carrie   Dec 6, 2004


A red rose
Solitary in the window
Poisoned by failure
Loathed by life
Blood leaking
From an unblemished petal
Forming a silent pool
At the base of an animus vase
Staining this unpredictable world
With its poison hate
The rose darkens
Until as black as night
Wilted and insipid; dead now
Poisoned by failure
Loathed by life
A black rose
Deceased in the window

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  • 19 years ago

    by no1important

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  • 19 years ago

    by no1important

    Sry i was just re reading my comment and i said good person of course u r but i meant cool person. There we have it. skinner

  • 19 years ago

    by no1important

    Ah ha thats where its from. i bought that movie for my sister and i knew it was from somthing but of course i can never remember. Ya i would like to get to know u to. I mean from ur poems u sound like a really good person. send me a private message and i send u one back cuz i don't have AIM wish i did but i don't. Well guess ill be talkin to ya later. Have fun (stay outa trouble lol) on ur school field trip. See Ya!

    love skinner
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  • 19 years ago

    by SCARECROW

    Red rose after black?! Nicely done.

  • 19 years ago

    by no1important

    Hey thanks for the comment and you r right about life killing us in the end. Its just i have been thru rough times and its kinda in a wierd sense made me stronger but hey. Well i really like this poem too See Ya!