Comments : Understanding I long

  • 19 years ago

    by Shana

    this poem is about me, I am wiccan yes. I wrote this because I suffer from being discriminated for what I believe in... But I will stay strong and never fall... "I can fall 4 times but I will get up 5 times"...

  • 19 years ago

    by Johnny Marlin 2

    excellent poem, don't let people ever talk down to you because of what you do, or don't believe. Take care, i don't know if you read my post, but I am leaving this site. I'll check in on you every once in a while. Take care, and feel free to e-mail me, I'd love to chat sometime.

  • 19 years ago

    by Shana

    I will miss you so much Jason! I will keep in touch with you!

  • 19 years ago

    by Kevin

    Yeah, so like bold effort.

    Being a Wiccan is a tough but rewarding road to chose amidst todays climte of Christianity....believe me i know..been there.

    This poem is well conceived, need some3 work in terms of how it flows i think...like a few words clipped or added in placed to make it more syllabically sound...but yeah...well done.

    Blessed be.

  • 19 years ago

    by ChildofGod87

    Wow Girl... I just can feel this poem! I liked it a lot! God Bless you and always be happy!
    ~!~Angel Loving Sedusha~!~

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    excellent poem! very good job, i like it!