hey, really good. Love isn't worth dying for. Well written though. Good job. 5/5

~no more

tori! that is SOOO awesome. I LOVE IT! omg...i read all your poems..and they are AMAZING!
Love you tonnsss,
Mary!

wow... i like that poem, it's so sad! :'(... but very well written! keep up the awesome work!
love always,
abcede

Hey.. whats up? i loved that poem. i know how you felt tha guy that i was w/ for almsot 2 years broke up w/ me for another chick.. then i found out that he cheated on me 2 times while we were together.... and i also lost my virginity to him......soo yea! well i love your poems!

Ronni

I'm speechless..

And reads what I wrote:
"I want you all to know I died for love.
I couldn't go on my emotions just flood.
And on my grave please do write...
That my broken heart could no longer fight"

^^
That part got me teared up...it's beautiful

5/5 deffenitly !!!!

Oh my god.... i cant breathe, your poem made me breathless. trully amazing, utterly astounding. Love it hun 5/5

'Giving myself to him was important to me
He told me if I did there would always be a 'we'"\

We've all been fooled by that poison of lies and deceit