Comments : Halfway To Anywhere

  • 19 years ago

    by Oliver Stevenson

    ANOTHER AMAZING POEM HUN :D keep up the good work, i'd mark it higer than 5 if i could!!!! xxxxxxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Toni

    Thanku! xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Toni

    Thanku so much hun!! xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Toni

    Thanku! (again!) lol xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by confusion

    wow. wonderful. relly liked the lines

    How soon is it now before I sparkle and fade?
    Close my eyes to disappear
    Halfway to anywhere, a place I've made
    With a single drop of a tear

    hope you're ok, an keep ya head up. lu -x-x-x-

  • 19 years ago

    by Toni

    Thanku hun! It means a lot! :-) xx

  • 19 years ago

    by ScarletHaze

    ace hun no other word i can think of 4 it! i would give u more than 5 if i cud!

  • 19 years ago

    by Toni

    Thanku so so so much!! x

  • 19 years ago

    by nicole

    this is an really great poem, i think i kinda got the story but it may take me awhile to really get it lol! neways loved full 5 for u! nicole x

  • 19 years ago

    by Infinite*

    really good, fantastic use of metaphors. xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Cecilie

    Your best one. Definately. I shed a tear for you.

    take care

  • 19 years ago

    by Toni

    Thanku so much!!! xxxxxxxx Don't worry if u didnt get the meaning i meant, it can mean anything u want it to :-) xx

  • 19 years ago

    by Joann

    damn i liked it so much ! ! keep it up...i like the way u write. --joann

  • 19 years ago

    by Alisha

    i loved it! awsoem poem!! keep up the gud work!!!!!! ur a really great riter and your writing gives me pictures in my mind as i read them!!! !
    <3 alisha

  • 19 years ago

    by Toni

    Thanku so so much :-) xx

  • 19 years ago

    by Toni

    Thanku! xx

  • 19 years ago

    by Ironic Allure

    This poem is so beautiful. I was eatnig chocolate and It made me stop before I put the next piece in my mouth, which is DEFFINITELY saying something :P Your phrasing is amazing hun, I can't believe you wrote this. Don't you ever give up, your poems are inspiring. Well done, Take care of yourself.
    x Laura x

  • 19 years ago

    by Toni

    Thanku! x

  • 18 years ago

    by broken angel

    I really liked this poem, and I think I understand the meaning. Well I could relate to it on some level, even if it's not the same one you intended me to. Hey, Ironic Allure said that my poem "Help Her" is alot like on of your poems. If you get the chance to read it, could you tell me which one you think it's like. And hey, feel free to read any other of my poems. It would really mean a lot coming from such a talented person like you. You're amazing, and truthfully, this poem was absolutely stunning!
    Luv always, KT

  • 18 years ago

    by enfant du tordu chagrin

    This is another great poem. I love your style and most of the meanings behind your poems. Well Done again.

    Andrew Kirkman
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