Sentiment Unknown

by Elizabeth Ann   Dec 11, 2004


Such obsessive audacity…

To exceed your boundary of understanding while assuming such impertinent ignorance of our mystery for which you’ve claimed…after all you could know of forever but for an ageless depravation!

A romance of blood…

Lust captures your susceptible hearts while your youth tends to blind you from Ra. And like oblivion maturity lays claim to become you venerable souls. Whence you come to understand the vulnerability of a frivolous imagination.

*Sighs, shaking his head*

As good is misunderstood to be naïve, love there also makes us victim to desire…. So can we then not be compared for our awareness and our mutual weaknesses?

*Grumbles*

Because I’m bound by death and sentiment’s unknown to me, I cannot know but hope for it to be enough for my peace of mind to help me against bleeding you all for your idiocy.

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  • 19 years ago

    by pinkalias

    Wow, you've done it again. Absolutly amazin, left me breathless. I love the way you word your lines, the intelligence in this piece is just beautiful (does that sound weird?) ok, well I absolutly love the speech in this poem and the observations and details of life summed up into absolutly mesmerizing words.
    "A romance of blood…

    Lust captures your susceptible hearts while your youth tends to blind you from Ra. And like oblivion maturity lays claim to become you venerable souls. Whence you come to understand the vulnerability of a frivolous imagination."
    Wow, that stance left me absolutly speechless. Wonderful job

  • 19 years ago

    by Elizabeth Ann

    I tried...
    And thank you!

  • 19 years ago

    by FTS Miles

    An intriguing, insightful discussion delivered from an interesting viewpoint.