lol, I love your poem, it's great, read mine sometime plz

HEy thanks people and thanks for classifying me as your friend. that rocks so much. its no problem to comment on your poems i like doing that keep rockin the poems!

hey your poem was really awsome, i liked reading it, it flowed and rhymed really good, thanks for commenting on mine
keep writing;)
xoxSamz~*~

Hey..This is a very sad poem:( I can really feel the sadness as I read it! That makes it really awesome...Thanks for sharing this..keep on writting okay! ^_^

awesome job i really really like it

I loved this. First the personifacation of life being held in ones hand, also the way you expanded on my this person caused themselves pain. In no certain terms am i able to describe the actual feeling i felt when i read this. One of pure sadness, maybe?

;;--Kalah

Uhh, that is SUPPOSED to say "why" instead of "my" :S excuse my poor proof-reading skills.

very good very sad