Wow..you sure choose ur titles well...this was a very well written poem..hope ur heart listen to what ur heart tells...take care and keep smiling....FIVE>>>

Amen girl! You speak it!! This poem was awsome maybeth..you poured your emotions in this peice very well!! I agree it was an amazing title as well as the poem itself! Your are an awsome writer and I love reading you work..as for your situation..agh! thats a little sticky..i'm sure you are better off without this guy just keep telling yourself that! Us women can be alone sometimes too..anyways Great Job again 5/5
Love Always,
~Chelsey~

wow such a fantastic piece of writing u are truley talented keep them coming FIVE ....

abby xxxx

this poem seems to be a big time rant. i know that your venting but the sylibils don't seem to match up with one and other and you seem to miss a beat or two *please don't take this as bad thing...i think your a wonderful writer, i am just trying to offer constructive critism *

I think that it isn't your best poem that you just sorta wrote it down and didn't think about what your fingers were type or your pen was saying. *also known as free association writing*

i think it is bad thing to have to write about, but i am sure that in time all things will heal.

"time heals all wounds" - i can't remember who said it.

above statement is very true...time and a lot of work and dedication.

Wow...Maybeth:) I was very Excellent and may I say "BRAVO"...hehe... ooops I did..lol.. I can really relate to that:D.. Yeah, it's kinda hard though to have someone move out of your life when they already put themselves there with the lies and crap like that!!! (Hopefully, I'm making sense..lol..) ~5/5~ Thank you for commenting on my 2 poems girl:) I loved to hear from you:D..lol.. Well, Keep on writing and Keep in touch:) God Bless you and Guide you:)!!!!!

~!~Lots of Love Sedusha~!~

shyt...i loved this poem...but was it ok to laugh...man i was feeling it...the title drawed me in but the poem kept me movin great job.

i reallly like this poem i wish i had told my head to tell my heart to stop lol. i really like all ur poems ur a great writing keep up the good work lol.