Very well done Holly, but i never expected less..Love, Tim

Holly
I don't understand how anyone can vote less than a five for this poem. I've read a lot of poems, and i read mine over and over...no once I was able to write so perfectly. You write beautifully...this one, is true that its short, because you didn't use words that didn't belong...right to the point..i love that...so good job, a five...

libby

hi Holly, what a lovely poem, you have a way of doing things so simply and yet so beautifully, again a lovely poem, but then i have come too expect the best from you, and I know that the puddles of life will never stop you for long, and if you get bogged down send word and i will come tow you back to solid ground again, your friend harry

Very nice poem. I like how you wrote it and your rhymes are excellent! =) Great job!

as always great work... very consice...your poetry is consistantly great... keep it up, and thank you for the kind encouragment on mine, i appreciate it very much. keep on sharing your world with us ~ take care
rose oxo

I agree. Real nice poem and good choice of words.

Lovely analogy in the end line.....I sometimes sense that life is so immense and emotional you could drown in it and be taken by the current. i love the structure, the flow, the words....another excellant poem!

so short but so full of words, defently love it!! *5~
Love Heather

No offense, but I wasnt overly impressed with the poem, but the concluding line was good and I wished I would have thought of that title! I liked it a lot.