that was really unique! negativity, sadness... it was well written. keep it up. take care:)

Excellent Writing.....

wow, i havent read any of your other poems yet, but wow, i have a feeling im going to love them all. your great, keep it up
i love the feelings and the images, you are quite an amazing girl, keep it up

well written dark poem

Happy New Year

Yes... niceee poEm. sad too.

take care

CyN

i'll save you !!! :D amazing poem, just great.

Wow Zoe this poem is deep and heart wrenching... always deserving a five though take care