leah your so talented..haha now I get to see all of your poems that you wouldn't let me read!!!

that is sooo good... wow! great work! 5/5!

very well written

Great poem very moving!!

That was good, and I thought the rhyming worked out fairly well. What I feel about 9/11 is that throughout history people have died, and we have to move on. Building monuments is great, and remembering those who have died is important, and never forgetting what happened is a must. But if we don't let these scars heal, then the terrorists did their job.

no it was his first day on the job so, that's where the title came from, although Last Day or something like that would have suited it also.

Aw so sad. I love your use of vocabulary! Keep up the good work!

*is speechless* you are truely talented. This poem was out of this world (wow that sounds really corny) but its true. I would give it a 6/5 if I could.

that was realy good, definately a 5/5 thanks for commenting on mine by the way xxxx

Another really powerful and moving poem! I love all your work.
Keep writing,
Rachelxx

omg...that was so touching...I'm adding you to my favorites you are an amazing writer...this poem nearly brought tears to my eyes...soo good

A very touching and meaningful poem. Nicely descriptive, and very sad. Very true, also. Keep it up.

Yet another great poem, kinda hard to believe such powerful words are coming out of one so young.

omg that was really touching...iv'e never felt to much when i thought of 9/11 cause it was so bad it was hard to imagine and i didn't know anyone who was there ya know? but when i read this it made me so sad...anyways awsome poem 5/5!

wow that were gr8!! had feelin and suspence and showed how much you truly care for all tho people and all their familys. great poem tho!! 5/5
love your writing:D

Jacs
xxx

very powerful, it made me cry.
love,
Katie

Your the first person that has been able to bring me to tears with a poem...This poem has so much meaning in it. I admire you for writing something like this. Excellent work. Def 5. >3jess

Oh my gosh... that's very sad... I hope no one that was related to you got hurt on that day... great poem though... 5/5.