Under The Moonlit Sky...

by vanessarrr   Dec 15, 2004


Under the moonlit sky
Festooned with stars
I imagine you there.
And my mind
Begins to wander.
Your voice is nothing
But a faint melody.
Your eyes are
Mine to pine for.
Your lips I cannot adore
For they are…
Unreachable.
How I long for the
Comfort of your embrace.
How I long for the
Softness of your face.
How I long for your fingers
To be entwined with mine.
And thus, I am a witness
Of love that’s blind
Of love divine.
Though it may seem hopeless,
My dreams are saved.
And love has paved
My destiny somewhere.
Under the moonlit sky
Festooned with stars,
I imagine you there.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Atomic

    Somehow this poem mange to take me into a very different world of poetry. Its a good thing. =)

    5/5

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • 19 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    Love woven into words.

    Simply put, the last magical act that is truely without any tricks or any illusions.

    This was a wonderful poem and i enjoyed it a great deal.

    Five/Five

  • 19 years ago

    by Cantchangeme

    Hauntingly brilliant, I get amasing imagery in my head when i read this and they like i said are haunting yet brilliant

  • 19 years ago

    by cooldude900

    awwww so sweeet poem
    so wonderfully written in a deeper meaning manner
    loved it very much
    gave you a 5 for that
    take care

  • 19 years ago

    by pinkalias

    I really liked this. I found it very romancitc and beautifully descriptive. I love how you detailed the imageries and symbols, and I also really admrie your word choice. the vocabulary really added a hightened effect to the peice, and I espeically admired the lines,
    "Under the moonlit sky
    Festooned with stars"
    I thought those were really lovely. Well done

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