The day that you died *dedicated to Jonathan and Ashley*

by Marcie   Dec 16, 2004


Gave you my heart
The day that you died
And on that day
I fell down and cried

With you, you took
That lonely heart of mine
And it is still beating
Why didn’t I heed the sign

My shirts blood soak-en
I just wish you were here
My hearts now a token
I cry a lonely tear

Without you I’m nothing
And to myself I have lied
I never accepted it
The day that you died

I just wish I could hold you
There wouldn't be any tears
I just wish we were together
To conquer all these years

I never asked this fate
Of you, you were supposed to be mine
But God was being selfish
When he picked you off the vine

Tonight I will join you
Or to hell I may go
I’m taking my life
Death’s my only foe.

writers block this is a ballad about my friend Jonathan who took his life after his fiancé died. They were only 17, and they were so in love.

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  • 19 years ago

    by ~:.GodeSsOfTemPtati0n.:~

    sad, but yet very well written... i liked this one, i cried... i remember my friend who took his life... i know how hard it is, but everything will be alright, coz he looking after u... much love... hope u pass by mine, votes and comments much appreciated

  • 19 years ago

    by Michelle

    Aww thats so sad. Great poem btw. It's sooo sad.

    <3
    Michelle