omg, that is so good. i no exactly wats it like but i never been able 2 express it. WOW, head up. nice work

Hey. Excellent poem. Poetry is the best way to vent, I say. I like this piece especially, simply because it is expressive and from the 'deep' down. Or the front steamer.

Good job.

[I know how you feel. Same ol'lies...same ol same ol. People only change with Christ. ;) 5/5]

ohhh sorrrry fir the little mistake. im sure you dont make any.

for* darn i made another one

you're comment was too. i wasn't really even serious about that. i only put it because you put that crap on mine. no one else seems to have a problem...

ohhhhhhkay haha

YOUR POEM IS EXACTLY HOW I FEEL.... thats what has happened to me lately.. and its freakyn sad.....:(

i think your juss jealous that their poems are good !!!!!!!! Tessa Marie

i think your poem was really good who cares about the mistakes ! everyone makes them ! GO LISA MARIE ! don't let any one bring you down !

THE LINES ARE VERY EVEN NICE RHYME SCEEME DESCRIPTIVE

It's a great poem and all except hang on, why are you writing a depressing poem lisa marie? I thought that no one is depressed? why don't YOU shut up with the sad poems, instead of telling others to.

Not bad. Not brilliant, but not bad either. All in all, it was pretty good.

wow i really loved the concept of it...wow wow wow. haha good job keep it up!!!!
Love Always,
Angel

Wondrerful!!!