Because you cared

by Iyla   Dec 17, 2004


You are my heart and you are my
soul

You were the one who comforted me when i was under control

I was controlled by my thoughts, my thoughts of death and you were the one who pulled me through

It all started because of a dream what i saw hurt my heart i saw you hurting and dieing in your sleep

So i thought " no i can't loose him he means so much to me, he's like my brother." and that's when i decided to leave

Since i had nothing left; i was loosing my mind, so i grabbed a knife and ran out the front door
i ran to the woods and just fell on the floor

i layed there for a minute, thinking of you, telling you how sorry i was, will you ever forgive me? please i need to know the truth

finally i was ready, as i started to plunge the knife deep into my heart,
a hand grabbed it away, it was you , i started crying, and said thank the lord for you have saved my life

My life could have ended that day but you were there, there's only one reason why I'm alive today and that's because you cared

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  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    It's good...good that someone's there when you are about to kill yourself...or else we will lose one great poet...you really are good...and i'll check others later...and can you check mine in the mean time...i really really need to know what a great poet think of a terrible poet like me...