My Vampire

by Your eyeliner is laughable   Dec 18, 2004


Come to meet me please my love,
Where the darkest angels lie,
And bring me back from deepest despair,
Without the will to die..

Come to meet me please my love,
Where the turbid water writhes,
In the icy grip of loneliness,
The story of our lives.

Down below the waning moon,
In twisted hurting pain,
The remnants of your distant life,
Preserved in woven chains,

And further past the forest lay,
A mortal soul that lost its way,
And as I wept the vampire heard,
and the love was told in his rhyming words,
and my faith was found and his shadows warmed
and the woven chains were now disarmed

And the story of the undecieved,
When the vampire whispered,
And I believed.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Bleeding_Red_Fallen_Angel

    oo I like it very dark..I like how you talk about the vampire talking to you. Very cool. <3333

  • 19 years ago

    by Shædow Poet

    Beautifully graphic; I loved it. A truly remarkable piece about the living undead. I admire this poem in all different aspects. It's original- and I'm a sucker for vampire poems.
    Well done!

  • 19 years ago

    by Kevin

    Bold effort.

    I can't add anything to this, which is unsual, brilliant flow, nothing too cliche about it...top ending.

    Like Anne Rice huh? Have you ever roleplayed a vampire before? I was Louis for about 6 months in this amazing story...i'm thinking of starting up something like that in here. WOuld you be interested?

  • 19 years ago

    by ŦōüċhÌήğ ỀνĬĽ

    This is really awesome work..I luv the topic^_^ and the words are just written so well and are so fluent..I could just read it over and over again and it would never get old..This is great..I luved it..Keep on writting okay
    Shanney

  • 19 years ago

    by Angel of Broken Dreams

    I loved it. truly amazing. Keep up the good work.

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