Great poem very deep and moving!!!
Loved it:)

Loved it what else is there to say.

Hope that's not based on ur life. Wait, a minute i'm so dum. Hope thats not in store for you at least. Seriously thou, that was deep and moving and haunting and wonderful.

that is an awesoem poem, very good job i love it, well written and from theheart

you know your tale is exacly what my life is my step dad and me fight and my moms to and i cut sometimes just for no reasons but mostly cause all the bull in my life it sucks

i know what u mean hunni,
keep smiling
xxxx

Wow that was a great poem deep and very well written! Thanx for the comment on mine I will have to read more of ur work when I have more time! Take Care!

OMG!!! i just have to say i dont usually like poems about 'cutting' but this was by far the best i've read!! i really love it!! theres no other words i can say!! it flowed perfectly, and...i love it!! keep it up and thanks for the comments!! take care!! :)

holy sh*t......... oh wow..... that poem was.... wow.... that poem got to me.. i.. i cant even hardely explain it right now.... wow.... i hope someone reads this who cuts and it effects them the way it did me... wow... outstanding poem...

vedali

WOW! great poem! i can relate to it so0 well. Your a great writer. Nice job! keep it up! 5/5

much love
savannah

Hey i kno u said i didnt hav to comment on ur poems but i decided to read them anyways lol. wow this one has alot of emotion n you really are good at writing--great job.
x3me

DEEP LOVE IT

very good poem.

no stains on that one!!!

could you please read one of mine called "The fate of a dreameR"

very good and very sad.. wow I love this poem! hugs 5/5

I love it!!! U r on my favorites girl! On to your next poem, I'm sure I won't be disapointed.
Jess

i love it very good... u have real talent..!

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