o hun thats sad but very pretty grat job -xxkrystalxx

excellent! gave it a 5
-tara

*rates a 5*
greatpoem, i can relate

great job, keep up the great work. i'm looking forward to more of ur poems.
l8terz,
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I really like the imagery, but like I said in one of my other comments, the rhyming lines need length consistency. Good job though!