i agree with Sunny...i thought it was perdy good...so creative!! God bless. loves. and i hope u continue to check out my poems God bless.

that was cool i liked it alot i liked this the best!!! I would have nobody around to care
None to impress, with the work I'd share

kewl

Great poem!!!

i like this poem and all but i think that it'd prolly would do better in the sad poems category

I really like this poem. Makes me want to go watch the Twilight Zone...keep up the good work.

Lovely poem, Nookie. Thought it was well done...<3 xxxxxx

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

i like it is a good poem it makes mine seem like crap its good

hey great poem i liked this one very creative

keep writing

**bianca**