My First: Part 2

by Chelsea Rae   Dec 27, 2004


Days went by
And you called me a lot
You made me feel special
My stomach all in knots

That night you kissed me
During a movie at my house
It was so amazing
I never wanted to get off that couch

You said \"I love you\"
I always replied the same
It gave me comfort
Our love I wanted to frame

It felt like nothing could go wrong
We were the perfect couple
But little did I know
I was in for a rollar coaster of trouble

Weeks went by
Your kindness was a little sour
You stopped saying \"I love you\"
I was beginning to cower

Then you power grew
It was like you controlled me
I no longer could do what I wanted to do
My freedom ignored me

It was all centered around him
Things have to go his way
I knew I should end this
But I can only stay

I care for him alot
Maybe he\'ll change
Things can only get better..?
This must sound so strange.....

(to be continued)

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  • 19 years ago

    by Chelsea Rae

    seems like me and ur friend have a lot in common.

    btw thanks im glad u like it

    -chelsea

  • 19 years ago

    by Casondra

    Thats really good. A friend of mine is in a relationship like that right now, with a guy I set her up with. I feel really bad because I feel like its my fault. He says he loves her and stuff but he hits her, and he doesn't let her hang out with her friends. Anyway this was good, keep writing, can't wait to read the next one.

    ♥Casondra