excellent point well done

that was great, i loved it. good job, it is really the truth. LYMTAB, ciao~lyn

Awsome, Lipton! I loved you metaphores and similies. Wow, this one is definately one of my favorites. exceptionally great!

AWESOME awesome poem! I can really relate to this one. You really have a gift for writing and you use it for the right reasons. Keep everything up and don't lose faith! ;) Peace

Wow...Deep and passion with the words! Excellent work! Check my poem "Shine The World Of Love" Again you have written a great piece! God Bless your heart!

*!*Sweet Angel Bliss Sedusha*!*

I comend your courage and wits to brave this master piece. This is lovely and scientific. Glorious defination and responce to the Christaian faith. Wish i can say it better. You took it just right out. More grace. More passion for the cross. Happy New year!!!

That was amazing. I particularily liked this part of the second stanza:
"How can a thermometer, and Bunsen Burner,
Measure the terrors, of Hell's fire?
And how can a microscope, and a brand new slide,
Show you the Hope, that God's filled inside?"
Beautifully spoken.

Well that was really impressive, Lipton. Very well written and expressed. The comparisons you used here were very apt and quite creative.
--Lydia

outstanding

Very inspiring, encouraging and faith-building!

Wow this is so true. I wish I could put things so naturally