Feelings I Have...

by deadnalone   Dec 28, 2004


I found this poem that i wrote a while ago and it was unfinished so i tried to finish it and am unsure where to put it so i put it here. I would appreciate any thoughts.

If three little words,
Can lift me in the air,
Can three more words,
Destroy what put me there,

Can love be crushed?
Will hate conquer all?
Will i stop this happy feeling?
Will people hurt me till i bawl?

Can i please never leave this?
Will you please let me stay?
I want to be here forever,
With you're arms round me this was,

With your lips kissing mine,
With your hand holding tight,
Onto whatever you can grasp,
I love you with all of my might,

I wish all this was really true,
I wish you really held me near,
But sitting with your hand in mine,
It's easy to see loneliness i don't fear,

Well not when you here with me,
I feel so alone,
I wish for you near,
Not to call you on the phone,

I love you babe,
I need you so bad,
I will never loose these feelings,
These feelings i have...

I don't like this one but *all votes and comments greatly appreciated as always*

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  • 19 years ago

    by joe

    already commented...but reading it again...lol awesome work!

    (Summer's Secret II is up and read, sorry its so long)
    take care
    -Allen

  • 19 years ago

    by jescelle

    great job babe! i love it!

  • 19 years ago

    by joe

    I dont kno why you dont like it, i agree with Jarous, it describes it pretty well, good poem, keep it alright ¿