Choices*

by Mustardhart   Dec 29, 2004


People, i was just thinking if this will do well in the quote section or it is really a poem. I find the in between too slim to distinguish, anyways you be the judge. nice reading^
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Yesterday fell and broke
Today staggering between crutches
Tomorrow depends on today
Today saw unheeding yesterday

Looked at tender tomorrow
They are wide-apart stories
That can only be well written
By today, or else...!
Tomorrow may not only break,
But die!!

(c) Gagman Cleopas

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  • 19 years ago

    by Jaime

    I'd say it's definitly a poem, it's very thought provoking. Keep writing, I love your work.

  • 19 years ago

    by Charlene

    Nice work..

  • 19 years ago

    by Sw33ti3

    It dont matter wat section its in..its great work and i liked it..keep it up
    *XoX Sw33ti3*

  • 19 years ago

    by Natalie84

    Good job...it was different, but good. I liked it. Keep it up and take care..

  • 19 years ago

    by Lipton

    Very interesting... Liked the language... It kinda kept my mind moving around, if ya know what I mean... Well, good job!

    ~Ciao Lipton