Thanks

by Erica Brown©   Dec 30, 2004


You're useless,
You need help,
You cause me so much stress,
You're pointless.

Thank you for pointing it out,
That I need to die.
But you didn't need to shout,
Or start to cry.

Because who is the sad one?
I am.
Who is holding the gun?
I am.

But who caused my depression?
You did.
Who made me start to question?
You did.

Thank you so much,
For showing that you never cared.
For holding my life in your clutch.
For making me scared.

It's truely sad,
How much hate me.
And how terrible of a life I had,
Thanks mom, for being exactly what I see.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    wow! awesome poem!! i love the third and fourth stanzas, the questions & answers part, it's REALLY good, VERY well written 5/5 definitely, great work!

  • 19 years ago

    by Erica Brown©

    Thank you..

  • 19 years ago

    by NoPatience

    this is a really good poem and its easy to understand keep up the good work!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Erica Brown©

    It probably isn't but hey everyone makes mistakes, thanks.

  • 19 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    Is truly spelt with an "e?" Anyhow, I thought the question/response stanzas were really interesting. Some of the rhymes were a bit simple, but I thought the ingenuity of the poem made up for that.

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