awesome!! 5!!
the rhythms sooo powerful!

that was awesome!

WOw....gave me the shivers. The flow is amazing aswell.
xoxZoexox

That was SO awesome..
keep writing, you are very talented

wow such a great rhythm powerful words i could fell the power in them ur really talented defferently a 5/5 ***** xxxx

good poem!!
-alex

jen

Like i said to you the other day this is a very very good poem keep up the good work
lylas always and forever
Your bestest friend Cara

this was awesome.

Awesomely good! Keep scribbling...

WOW like spine tinglys up my spine. really good poem
luv ya xoxox

i love it....i so understand it...i feel insane alot because NOBODY understands me.not even my best friends or my sisters!

very good! I can relate to that at times

amazing job!!

I really like this poem. The first stanza caught my attention straight away and kept me reading instead of being distracted. Flows very well all the way through and the phrasing is lovely :) Well done Take care :)

gr8!!!

Good work!

i really liked that it was so..dark it had a great flow to it keep it up

~~~GloomyGirl~~~

wow, well what can i say im speechless, but i will say this, greatly written and awesome job! PLEASE COMMENT N VOTE ON MY POEMS!!

Sweeet. I really like this one. I give you the award of one of the best Erica has seen in days! You just made my day! Thanks! And great job!!!!!

This poem had my attention throughout. It flowed so well and you described your feelings perfectly. It was easy to read and truly enjoyable...though a little sad. Hate to see people "feeling isane" :)

Excellent write! 5/5 :)