Beautiful Rose

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I am a rose
Standing strong in the storms
Trying to come close.
Fighting with all my might
Failing as I go
But i am going to fight!

As the storms comes,
and as the scars begin to grow,
I begin to roam.
Because I get so confused,
So left behind.
I just get too much abused.

But I need to stand on a rock
that then i know that I can't fall
when people mock.
Instead, I will shine the light
that had saved me
Then they'll see the light, they just might!

Because I am a beautiful rose
and i am beautiful in God's eyes
and no one knows.
But i am God's master's plan
and He knows that I can,
become all that He wants me to be!