nice poem! really nice

lovely oustanding masterpiece .......5>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
beautiful amazing what else can i say thaks for sharing

Okay...

I like the general idea of this poem and the basic layout... and I know that you must have felt depressed while writing this... but... I think you've put too many questions in a single poem. If I were you I'd shorten it a little bit...

Otherwise, good job.

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