wow thats really gd im so glad it didnt happen 2 u or ur parents though xxxxx

this was great its sad and im glad you didnt have to go threw it

I like it because of the story kindof quality. Keep it up!

sad but good.

Again, deep, but I have to know, did this really happen? Also, you might want to look for a poem I am almost done with called, The Vampires Kiss....

Hey, this is really good...im glad it didnt happen to ur parentz...keep on writing and take care...
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

I'm glad that it didn't happen to you. But it was an very well-written poem! Sweet job! 5/5
Luv always, KT

Awesome.

(Glad it's NOT based on a real situation.)