good job! x

nice job!

amazing girl as usual !! i can totally relate to ur poems. keep it up, i really enjoy reading ur poems
- shell x

very nice work wit this one .. for the past hour or so i haev been reading ur poems only and u have a very good talent, awesome work .. i love them .. ! And ur right poetry is a very good way to express urself ... and ur words are put together so beautifuly .. and i love ur poetry and i was hoping maybe u would look at mine and let me know what u think about them .. id love to kwno what u think .. thanks and keep up ur amzing work !!
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wow that was such a beautifully written poem! my favourite of yours. thanks for commenting on my poem.. and i actually never realized that the ryming changed in that section, thanks for pointing that out!

Beautifully written, flows great! Yet another great poem! Keep it up =) X