Comments : Tribute

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Real friends are some of the best people in the world...it's wonderful to appreciate them and let them know you love them, some people forget to. Beautiful!

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Tiny Reader

    Very good poem. One suggestion:
    In the times I had nothing,
    and thought all was lost.
    You were my best friend,
    no matter [what] the cost

    Personally, I think by adding what into the final line, it makes the flow slightly better, but it's your poem.
    Sweet poem. Good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by AllHailTheHeartbreaker

    Sweet poem. Keep up the good work!
    -Kate

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    ReBecca
    A beautiful tribute to your friend. It has been friends who have lifted me when I was giving up. I have met so many Angels here on P&Q...I was at my lowest point when I joined this site....now I look forward to waking each day....I am so glad you have someone like this in your life. Great job on your poem.
    Take Care Cindy