you make an outstanding point is the second part. i also love the way you say one thing then go and contridict it in the next part. great poem, keep up the amazing work!!

this poem is great zoe !! keep up the good work (now this comment is just sooooooo boring....) whatever

yes it is....

This poem is awesome! keep up the good work! 5!

Great Poem But I Just Wanna Say..I Know That When Someone Commits Suidide They Hurt Others..But In Their Mind Its Kinda Fair Deal..They Dont Have To Live With The Inner Pain Anymore.And People Can Go On Remembering Who They Where Before That Pain Instead Of Watching Them Suffering..Just Wanted To Say That..

Hailey's right...umm and zoe i do like ur poem and its in the right category

God bless. <3 Heather M Craig

Good poem!i loved it!keep up the good work!!!!

love it,just returning the favore.i'm glad you liked my clown poem.i got the idea from a shel silverstein poem.
~a friend at wits end

I do so agree with you, great poem:)

I LUV it. everyone seems to be telling you to keep up thw good work so I'll say sumthing else...YOU LIVE IN FRANCE thats so mad! please write n tell me about it! i cant figure out how to get ur email off reading ur poems!
luv siena(nanz)
p.s. i am so showing this to my almost suicidal friend coz she doesnt realise shes taking me down with her

bow at hailey... i liked ur other poems... i liked this one too, but theres something in it that i disagree...
ima suicidal... thou we drag people down with us, that doesnt mean they always gonna be down for the rest of their lives... people forget as time passes by, and they will bury the pain that we (suicide) once created, and good memories always remains...
sometimes people that cant relate to us(suicidals) they tend to close their eyes and mind to the reality, and that drags us down even more...
the reaason why things happen is couse some tends to take away the understanding we need...
(((just a thought i wanna share =) )))

anyways... nice poem zoe =) hope u pass by mine and read the mind of a suicidal... (((hugs)))
much love...
***letishia***

I cannot believe I have never commented on this... this poem is so amazing and so true I cried reading I lost my best friend to suicide