i like it... it exlains alot how i feel about my x

actually, I LOVE this poem... it's really great and in many ways I can relate. Keep up your writing is AWESOME!
much love,
-Mols

I love it!!!!!!!!!!! I can relate to it like known other!!!!
~M

I relate to this so much, it's ironic. I am aware that they are probably very different situations, but I have definetly felt that way.
I really liked how you wrote the whole piece sarcastically, it really portrays the anger and betrayl of the story. I escpecially liked the lines,
"Now I take this knife I love
Isn't it pretty in the beaming moon light?
With these last few fading phrases
I kiss the blade with skin, and say goodnight."

I really thought those were lovley, great job

you are such an awesome writer you bring out so many of my emotions i was just thinkin about my b/f when i read that and you actually got a tear down my face, i realized my life isnt so bad and i realized this must be very tough on you. im sorry gurl stick in there