Very good poem. I agree with everything you wrote.. an excellent writing! =) I hope you had a great new year's eve.. take care & God bless!

very wise excellent message 5>>

That was a really beautiful poem you've written.. Deep and meaningful..

that was really kewl, i liked it. the title sounds suspiciously(sp?) familiar. lol. anyway, great job. ciao~ LMYTAB lyn

omfg! that was sooooooooo incredibly awesome! wow! u have no idea how perfect that fits my life right now...i hate delimmas...and i cant spell
but great job and keep writing!!!!!!!!

Wow... I really enjoyed this... I liked the repeating stanza... please tell me you've made it a song!!!

whew made me think...this is an awesome poem!i put it on my wall to remind me of whats important! truly amazing! keep up the good work!

OMG ur such a good poet keep up the good work i'd just like to say thax for posting the thing about the chat room in the disscussion i really appreciate some one telling me whats going on i read your profile and it says you play the guitar i wanna learn to play the guitar lol os zto get off the subject gr8 poem best wishes always
luv rach p.s please check out some of my poems

Fantastic poem it really makes you think!

Your poem really captures how God can come backat any moment. one song I have heard says something about living like we are dying and your poem reminded me of it.

Everything in that poem is so true. Well written. rate and comment. >3jess

Awesome poem with a thought provoking message. I enjoyed it.
Take care and God bless you!

I loved the message, and I especially loved the way you delivered it....great work, I' m off to read a few more of yours.......please take a moment to read a few of mine, I would be honored...Dear God, and In Memory of a man I loved, and The Miracle of Life, are a few I think you may like....love ya Becky

that was really awesome, it's so true, people dont think often enough about what time can do to you, and they stubbornly dont care until it's too late...

amazing job on this one.
I loved the way you wrote it.
and the title is very good too.
wish you the best,
marjan

I love this poem, It is all so very true
Everything thing is on point, every word has its meaning
that was amazing, keep it up