Wow, this was incredible. Not slang at all though? I really enjoyed this, and I could totally relate! 5.

i loved it - really. Its very interesting, and meaningful. well done!

awesome work wicked sick poem hehe wicked sick ha i sound like that one dude potter er something lmao well killer poem :)

oh wow this is really good. God Bless U!!

awsome poem... i love it and i'm going through something like that right now. you're a wonderful poet =).

xx justine

Really well written i enjoyed it much keep up the good work