Thoughts

by Erica Brown©   Jan 7, 2005


Sometimes I stay up all night,
Thinking of us together.
And when I'm alone,
I wonder how you tore me apart when I was as strong as leather.

I can't go an hour,
Without you on my mind.
From when we first fell in love,
To now, how you are so hard to find.

I've searched every crack and corner,
I've retraced my steps so many times.
But no matter how hard I look,
I'm left with thoughts of you ringing in my head like a bunch of chimes.

I'm begging for you to return,
I cannot go on like this.
All alone, depressed and confused,
With memories of our last kiss.

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 19 years ago

    by Chelsey

    DANG!! This is truly amazing!! Sorry for your loss though..Break ups do hurt yes I know..But things/people that were meant to be will come back to us...And if they don't it only means someone better is coming along!! I am one of those people who believes there's someone out there for everyone and even if things don't work out with this person you wrote about...Someone better is on the way!! Great poem ..i loved the emotion it was so tense!
    Kind Regards,
    ~Chelsey~

  • 19 years ago

    by Ironic Allure

    I do like this poem, but I think again your lines need to be balanced out so that it flows better and makes it easier for people to read. I for one can relate to it, which also helps with viewers and I'm sure alot of people can. Well done, Take care :)

  • 19 years ago

    by yo yo yo

    OMG its realllyy good lol. i liked it alott. until my bf i kept wishing my low life ex bf would come back to me. read and comment on my poems plz. thanks..

Read All Comments (3)

More Poems By Erica Brown©