You said it and i believed it

by Alex D   Jan 8, 2005


*really old one probably one of my worst ever but hey you might think differently*

you said it...
i believed it...
its true for me as well...
i love her unconditionally but i don't think she can tell...
make me choose between her and life...
i say please let me borrow your knife...
unconditional love i bring...
my heart is dangling by a string...
my girl is the puppet master...
of my heart shell mend it faster...
she tore my heart in two...
but i don't think she ever knew...
that she only broke herself
because i gave to her all of myself...
forever my deep love she keeps...
i just hope this pain she has caused me doesn't go to deep...

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  • 18 years ago

    by LeXi

    oh mi gosh! i love it! its beautiful! awesomly writin. keep goin. i think that this is my fave love poem on this site. xoxo lexi oxox

  • 19 years ago

    by Alex D

    i meant cuz i wrote it in 42 seconds.. lol and iunno.. it just didnt sound very good.. iunno but thanks =)

  • 19 years ago

    by Lushed

    awww. this is sooo good
    I love this part the best:
    forever my deep love she keeps...
    i just hope this pain she has caused me doesn't go to deep...

    Its so not bad, what r u talkin about?!

    <3 jenny