thnk you guys for commenting it means alot xxx

aww. this is a very touching poem. i really like it. Sorry to hear what happend. Keep up the good work
Paula<3

A wonderful peom, I am orry about your loss. Keep it up. Hold your head up high :]
Take care,

-Cheerfully Cynical

This is a great poem! Lotz of feeling! Sad but good, im sorry about ur uncle! but ur poems r good so dont say they're bad
Love alwayz Carz
xoxoxox

that was so sad, it seems you miss him greatly. This is also a very good poem, very strong and heartfelt, keep it up!
kt

Thank you so much for all your comments, it means more than words can say cos this poem is one of my fav's bt also my sadest xxx

Sad, but sweet poem. Keep up the good work.
-Kate

Very emotional. You have a way of bringing the reader into the poem as if trying to imagine his pain and his family members. Sorry about your uncle. Keep up the good work. Take care!
-Conner

This poem makes you feel like the person who wrote this. Sorry for your loss. This was a great poem. 5/5

this is a great poem it really makes u think! it also made me feel sad im sorry 4 ur loss but keep up the good work! 5/5
much luv xoxo
Emma

very very good.. i gave it a five..very sad

This is a great poem, for I can easily connect. Please read my poem "cancer", I do believe you will find it very interesting. If you do, it will be greatly appreciated!