Great poem very deep and you really made me feel your pain, loved it Keep it up!!

This was very well written poem. I know how despairing it can be to find that those closest to you have been deceitful and untrue. Although this was an outpouring of heartfelt sorrow. I see a ray of hope in your lines:

I’m left to look up I can fall no more
There is no more down when I’m on the floor

To me that indicated that a recognition that the only path from there is upward.

Wishing you all the best. --Lydia

Excellent job with this poem....love the feeling put into it...keep it up

That is a stunning poem It express' wat alot of ppl feel including me. If you get the chance read a few of mine

very deep and stunning. excellent poem. xxx

The fourth and third last lines are my fave, good idea there. X

Great feeling. another good poem

good job! i really liked the flow, but your rhyming was off on a couple of spots, otherwise excellent! 5/5

FANTASTIC. This is my favorite. 5!

Despair. No fear, no hope, just empty. Burned out to the point that even though the worst is over, you cannot bear to rise again. That's what I felt from it, anyway. Been there. That's a 5 for me.