Beautiful Trince! Great to see a new poem by you...I can relate to that one a bit...not a pre-arranged marriage or anything but I can relate to that on other levels...great work on this one!!

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--Sierra Rae

Heya Trincy, This was Amazing poem! I really liked it:) *5/5*... Check some of my poems if you get the time!! God Bless you! Have a wonderful year!

~!~Sweetness Sedusha~!~

oh... I meant to say "Welcome Back"... :D

Trincy!!! Haven't seen you for the longest time as well... great to see you write again, very nice poem, and very sad as well cause its like that in the olden days... :D good thing this is just a poem, I was worried that this was for real ;) Keep up the good work, hope everything is well, take care :D

Nice poem Trincy. that's the way it is right - all parents hope to achieve thier dreams thru their children. and sometimes, it's hard to draw the line as to where to stop. your imagination sounds well strung here!

Thanks a lot for your appreciative comments on mine! am going to take a look at some of ur other stuff as well. feel free to comment on mine too!

looking forward to hearingmore from u.

shobhana

I agree, great job. I usually don't care for that rhyming scheme, but you've worked it very well. The flow was very solid and meaningful.

This poem can relate to so many people on all different levels.

Welcome back, btw.

Good to have you back,Trincy...Nice poem...i do agree with u...take care and keep smiling...FIVE>>>

I really liked this poem. The rhyming, and the rhythm - it was very well done. I was about to ask in here if it was true, but then I read it wasn't, lol. My only complaint is that it was very safe - as in to say, it kind of stuck to all the rules too much. It's not a bad thing, and it's only a personal thought about it. Overall, like I said, I really liked it.

nice poem trincy...keep writing!!!