Let Me In or Let Me Go

by Gabby   Jan 12, 2005


There’s something about your eyes,
That makes me feel so alive.
And it’s calling to me,
Should I answer, or let it be?

I want it to be a happy ending,
One that’s beautiful, and bright
But I just feel like I’m pretending
And hug my pillow tight.

And I want this to stop,
I need to know what your feelin’.
But I wont waste a drop of these tears
Cuz I’m the one that’s dealing.

Why can’t you tell me what your true feelings are?
I really need to know.
Are you too afraid you’ll leave a scar?
Please, I don’t want to let you go.

But you haven’t opened up your eyes yet,
You won’t see that I’m right here
Maybe I should see how far I can get
Without having you near.

I don’t really want to let you go,
I want to be in your arms forever
But if you won’t let me in,
Then how can we be together?

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  • 19 years ago

    by Gabby

    hey gabs your poem was good. i loved it and i have a feeling its about jonathan. :) am i right?? i bet i am. well, i LOVED it. i'll see ya later hon. have a good day.

    Katie

  • 19 years ago

    by Scar upon my mind

    Good Poem. I think it was good, especially the ending, but I think you need to work on your beat as well. But the lyrics were great. Sorry bout the negative comment, but its what I think