very interesting, another great piece of description!

i love it! very dark and enriching poem.

I like it.

Nicely dark and passionate. A very enjoyable read; I'd like to hear more about this compassionate dweller in the shadows....

BTW, a typo in the 7th stanza: "ally" should be "alley".

Okay, well I liked the "Hopeless Suicide" better, I think.. but this one's not bad, either.

I didn't particulary like this stanza at all...

You may look down on me
And say I'm not right
But you haven't a clue
Of my inner sight

....it lacks the poetic feeling that you've given to some of your other stanzas and other poems. But the poem overall was alright.

I thought this was very beautiful and intriguing. Beautifullu dark with a sense of passionate evil that ignites when the subject reaches his sight of prey, lovely. I really liked how you portrayed the emtoions lit by the sad parting of a turned fantasy at the end. Well done

Amazing poem ... The title is what captivated me, I'm not so sure why. Perhaps because it's unusual. Anyways ... I thought this was a wonderful poem, full of imagry, and detailed descriptions of emotions.

I really liked this particular stanza-
"Hunger for the blood
Of the innocent at heart
The romantic lust
That sets vampire's apart"
I like the way you incorporate vampires in the poem. It doesn't seem forced at all, and it's unique. It's not expected.

Great poem.
[p.s.- you really should submit more often.]

Very nice. I give u a 5.

Wow this poem was so amazing... it was like reading a mini story then again I always love your work