Not over yet

by Sinister Soire   Jan 12, 2005


These wings I’ve grown have set me free
My vision they expand
It’s like I’m up above the sea
Soaring above the land

Maybe I have always had them
But the shackles have held me down
For me they cannot condemn
The weights are lifted with my frown

I am free now to be me now
If only for a short time
In respect for my friends I bow
For dealing with this grime

The muck of school is not over yet
But freedom we do feel
Because of the mid-term ex-am threat
We get a chance to break and heal

The days which are soon to follow
Will be full of fun and laughs
Because this repression we cannot swallow
As we resist the charts and graphs

copyright 2005 © Logan Brown

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  • 19 years ago

    by Sw33ti3

    Very nice poem..its really amazing and i think ur real talented..so im off to read more of ur work..keep it up and ill check some more out...

    *XoX Sw33ti3*~|kEeP oN sMiLiNg|~

  • 19 years ago

    by Ironic Allure

    Very nice Logan. Lovely phrasing. I've never read anything like this before. Makes a change. Well done, Take care.
    -Laura.

  • 19 years ago

    by Elise

    excellent !!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Sinister Soire

    thank you soo much, i love you soo much, i love you, you are amazing, the best ever

  • 19 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    ooOooOooOoo Excellent hun! thought it was way well written =)...you're so incredible, wish I could write as good as you <3 you're so amazing, everythign about you is just like...wow...just you're everything good...i love you hun...you're amazing <3 xxxxxxx

    -Mortalidaga
    xxTakeCarexx

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