Time Stands Still

by Dwain   Jan 13, 2005


When the sun came up
sky barren of rainstorms
forshadowing an equivalent night
such never came
time stood still
friends that tasted
admission of love wasted
she'll never understand
my eyes burned
longer than id shown

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  • 19 years ago

    by martynsgirl

    i like the way you write your poems, there very different to the rest of us (in a good way i promise) fnx 4 commenting on mine xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by AllHailTheHeartbreaker

    Great poem! I really like your writing style. It's unique, yet easy to read at the same time. Thankyou so much for your helpful comments on my poetry - it was really appreciated! Good luck & keep it up!
    -Kate

  • 19 years ago

    by Dwain

    thanx for the comment