Let me know if you can figure out the play on words in this poem.... Thank you for taking the time to read it. I appriciate it.
Aaron

hey hun, of course you found something to write...glad to see you came up with something new! loved the second stanza! keep writing more! lets me know what you don't say.
Love Heather.

hey i liked this..original stuff!

wicked! I love it, good job and keep up the great work!

emma x

Wow Aaron. Your writing has gotten much better! This is a very nice piece. I saw you mentioned in one of the discussions as "most imporved," so I wanted to see if it was you or another Aaron, but regardless I want to commend you for improving your skills,
Much love,
Kaitlin Kristina

that is honestly very good! very intense and something about it... keep writing! 5/5
luv kt