My life!(part 1)

by Priscilla   Jan 18, 2005


I don't know why God won't let me die
But when I do please don't cry.

If you see ,I want to die bad!
So if I do soon please don't be sad.

I want to be dead
So many things going through my head

So many people in the world
Nobody noticing this little girl.

Somebody notice me!!
I need you to see!

I want somebody in my life
But there isn't so ill kill myself with a knife.

I take the knife put it to my heart
Think about what I'm doing before I start.

I realise all I want is to be loved
Not to be stomped on or to be shoved

I know what I want now
so the only question is how?

-plz vote/comment..thanx -love priscilla patterson

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  • 19 years ago

    by Paula

    I can really feel the deepness of this poem, and i can relate to it easily. I know how you feel. Keep on writing
    Paula
    xoxox
    P.S if you have a chance it would be cool if you could comment on a couple of my poems, or atlease vote

  • 19 years ago

    by tragic

    hey i may not know you but what I do know is in order to be loved you must love yourself and i know how can u love yourself when no one loves u but how can anyone love u when u dont love urself its a vicious cycle and thats tough but try to look at the glass half full look at how ur blessed not how ur life is messed and there are people like myself that care alrite just dont do something stupid dont take the easy way out you can make it through just do w/e ever it takes what ever makes u happy do it and i know suicide wont make u happy u wont be able to be happy then, hmm well u ever need to talk id love to help cdr_70@hotmail.com check out my poem same tittle as yours lol

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