But outside I act just fine..i really didn't like tht line much..but i liked the idea though

Overall, I'd say this poem is very well written. There are some words I thought didn't fit, like 'dead', 'process' and 'contrite', but it doesn't deaden the poem or anything. I think you need to be clear as to what those voices are telling you to do though.

great poem keep up the good job thanks for reading / commenting on mine >5<

This was alright, not your best. I really liked this stanza though :

Invading my every thought
They will never go away!
I can’t even think straight
My thoughts in disarray

i loved it a lot, totally relate...just wishing they would go away!! defently well written...God Bless U
Love Heather

haha, i feel you. i feel the exact way. freaky