The Beginning of My Sorry

I feel so weak today
i hurt you so bad
i regret what i did
I'm scared I lost what we had
i love you so much
nothing else comes can come near
i made a mistake
loosing you is what i fear
i don't deserve a second chance
but I'm hoping you'll give me one
your everything and more to me
when its raining your my sun
your my warmth when its cold
your my strength when I'm weak
without you in my life
my world would seem bleak
you do so much for me
when I'm down you lift me higher
your all i want
your my hearts only desire
i love you with all i got
I'll prove how much you mean to me
I'll do nothing but love you
this is just the beginning of my sorry

what do you think? Is it good enough to give to my boyfriend? thanks in adavance!!