Wow. I got the chills reading that one. Keep it up.

i like your style of writing...good work...~sherrie~

another great poem, u really have talent, hope 2 read more of ur work soon, great job!!!

Excellent. I like this one.

Excellent poem, very different from anything I've read on here. Different thought too. Whether It's good or bad, I don't know.
It's a clever Idea, cleverly written, but I'm sorry for how you feel.
Take care of yourself,
Always here.
All my love,
Laura.

Jeez! You cease to amaze me with your talent! This was really original. I really enjoyed it. Keep it up!

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that was so good and different from anything iv'e ever read! all your stuff is really good...your a really great writer
and thanks for your comment on mine too

strange and intresting and defiently unique.......... love it!

Excellent work. I really liked this one. Unique and different. You are a very talented writer!
Take care,
Rachelxx

The descriptions in this piece were beautifully spoken. It's a different type of poem than most, and I think that's what's so captivating about it. The title is what caught my attention, because I thought it was clever. This poem has something about it that makes it unique .. and I really like that.

this one is the best I've read of your's.

It is simple, yet deep, and the two last lines were great.

Nice flow..

good rhyming

=very good poem:)

That is such a awesome poem. Very emotional. Made me feel sad. But i loved it. Great work!! Keep it up! Xx Chrissie