No offence but i thought this poem coul dhave ended sooner and was a little long winded! was still goo dthough
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I thought this was great, nice one, luv feebz x x

dange you gone dawn make me cry. excellent poem, really sad. 5

nice job i really like this poem..Tait man doesnt no good poetry if it kicked him in the a $ $...the poem is sad tho..