this poem wasnt really long but it wasnt short. it completely filled its expectations. i liked the concept of the poem and the points you brought up. you can rhyme well. keep rockin the poems
-iyke

that was really good, i hopeso much its not true bt if it is stay strong, check out mine if u get chance thanxs, take care xxxxxx

*hugs ya* great poem. your a great writer keep up that work.

Stay strong... that was a really good poem,I liked it a lot. *stares in amazement* O_O I loved how it rhymed and flowed as well.Keep up the good work, hold your head up high.

-Cheerfully Cynical

This was a really good poem....very strong...great job Much Love JJ

Hey this is an awesome poem! i really like it! keep up the awesome work!

xX-Katherine-XX

Don't wish your father dead. Trust me I wished my mother dead and now she's on her death bed and I feel sorry that I ever wished her dead.

you should check out my poem "with all my heart"....It's about fathers. You might like it.

"with my whole heart" is the actual title....sry

Aw Im so sorry your dads like this. Hope things get better for you soon. You wrote this poem very well. It had a lot of emotion in it. Excellent job.
Stay strong and take care,
Rachelxx

wow, very powerful...I love it.. I'm sorry about ur dad...But life must go on I guess...Keep up the amazing work ! Take care,
E.

no how u feel my dad turned to drugs as well he died a little while bak. never really new him. gd poem though keep writing ur one of me faves xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Again a great poem... im so sorry your dad's like that. I can sort of relate. It had a lot of emotion in it. Great write keep writing, take care

The power was there and the flow was good. the message was real clear I think I would have to give you a 5 great job kiddo...

Love the rhymes...nun seemed forced...again a gr8 sence of ur pain...if u ever need 2 talk 2 sum1 im only an email away...anyway...wow...u are wonderful...i bet sumday ull b famous 4 ur poetry....5/5!!!
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