Hey awesome poem! i really enjoyed reading it! awesome job!

xX-Katherine-Xx

that was a great poem, keep up the good work

Excellent poem and very creative. I live in Canada, so I can't really relate to the U.S.A. but from the poem it sounda like a nice country. Nice work! if u have time, vote or comment on some of mine, thx!

wow, you are some talented 13 year old! that was very breath-taking and meaningful, the wording was very powerful, a joy to read, keep it up xxxx

I pledge Allegiance to the flag
Of the corporate states of America
And to the republicans
For which it stands
One nation,
Under debt,
Easily divisible
With liberty and justice for oil

you mistake your ignorance for bliss..if only you saw past into the attrosities and injustices of this war and the insencere judgement of our so called leader "Bush"

Corpses piled like stacking blocks
Fitting together, each one a story to tell
Children crying, hopeless and bloody
Iraq in such confusion
For they never hurt anybody

Vietnam, the holocaust
History repeating
Fascism for all
Only free are those not breathing

that was good. i really liked it.